Thursday 18 March 2010

15

Your eyes are my spies
Spilling your secrets
Unearthing what you never say
Revealing your thoughts
You say that they betray
But I would be lost without them
You would remain such a mystery
But with your eyes I see. 

1 comment:

  1. The overall motif of the poem that I think Monica is trying to demonstrate in "15," is how eyes of a human being are so important in communication. The line, "Unearthing what you never say," is a perfect exemplar of the insignia. By being able to depict the emotion through sight is not only an alternative way of depicting how a person feels, but maybe even a more accurate way of how him/her feels. Using simile to explain how the eyes can reveal thoughts in the poem was magnificent. -- 10/10

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